Friday, January 13, 2017

The first story I sent off to be rejected! It's called Shine On.

about 3,000 words

Shine On

The ripples chased each other across the silvery surface of the tiny pond, eddying and swirling around his fingers. The thick coal dust that covered him from head to toe clung stubbornly no matter how vigorously he scrubbed. He couldn't remember the last time he had encountered such a place – a calm little piece of nature amid the enormous piles of coal that were now everywhere.
Coal hills, coal valleys, coal mountains… there was the promise of pearls, moonstones and the ever elusive sunstone. Periodically, the earth would rumble and slosh like the deck of a ship and all the piles would shake and shift and grumble to themselves as they settled into more stable positions until the next quake. The red roiling clouds would answer in kind with thunder so loud and deep, he felt it as much as he heard it. The sky overhead looked like a Bosch triptych, and truly didn't bear looking at, unless one enjoyed terrible vertigo and nausea.
If he stopped looking for the stones or even stopped moving for too long during the day, the clouds would begin tossing enormous bolts of lightning the size of trains across the sky, and the earth would shake in growing intensity until even the massive coal mountains themselves began to rattle apart in slides as big as whole cities. The second time he'd experimented, the experience had been so terrifying, chaotic and deafening, he didn't dare risk it again. Somewhere in all these smothering mounds of coal were deposits of those rare stones. He had to find them, or the end of the world would rumble down around him.
He watched as the ripples faded from the surface of the pond, then recoiled, nearly falling backwards as Death stared back at him with its deep ebony sockets seeing impassively through him, ivory fingertips reaching for him. He laughed at his own fear. It was merely his own reflection mourning all the weight he had lost. All the bones in his face were clearly visible now. He watched his fingertips trace the hollow lines of his cheek, then trail along the edge of a bony eye socket.
The ground rumbled and the clouds above thickened, looking like Pepto Bismol had been stirred in. They roiled even more and added their throaty tenor to the Earth's deep bass. He had to get moving. He had to get searching again, lest he trigger a storm of raging lightning screaming across the sky, while the earth rolled like an ocean, the coal on top sloshing around the surface like waves. All he could do was flail around on top, try to keep his balance and, above all, stay on the surface. But as long as he kept up the search, things stayed relatively calm.
He had woken up there one morning, lying propped on his back against a pile of coal lumps the size of his fist, stacked in a hillock the size of his house. All he had was what he was wearing – sturdy black leather boots, not his own but they fit, and an eggshell blue heavy-duty coverall of some unknown material, also not his own. It was thick and rubbery and acted like armor against his many falls. He also had a hat of similar material as the coverall, only a deep dark indigo blue.  He couldn't remember how many years ago that had been. One day just segued into the next, blurring together until all that mattered was finding more stones.
It was the same every day. He woke and breakfasted on the hardy, leafy green moss that sprouted around the occasional spring or stream that bubbled up to the surface between the lumps of coal. He would have a few handfuls of the surprisingly clear spring water, and then it was up to shuffle along again the great hills of coal. His eyes would squint for a glitter, straining desperately to see something shiny amidst the ebony lumps. Occasionally, he would think he saw something. He would fall to his knees to dig and pry great lumps out, tossing them away over his shoulder, trying to locate the source of the shine. Most of the time it was just what he called pearls – lumps that looked like the milky jewel, except they glowed from within and gave off a small amount of warmth.
Sometimes, They would let him keep the smaller ones, taking only the biggest for themselves out of spite. Pearls were not valuable to Them. However, it was cold out there and the precious warmth they gave off was highly prized by his icy fingers and toes. He would carefully stash them in his socks and in his pockets, taking them out at bedtime to warm his hands and tracing the tiny trails of color unique to each one that ran through the otherwise unblemished identical pearl-white spheres. He thought them to be pretty.
Up above through the perpetual gloom, something glinted amongst the coal chunks creating the top of the hill. He wearily approached and saw a very thick layer of what looked like very colorful sand running up to the crest and over. His heart began to beat a little faster. He knew what a trail like that meant. During the course of one of the many quakes and lightning strikes, a mountain had fallen, burned and crushed the thousands of moonstones and pearls the lightning had created. The enormous temperatures and pressures could potentially create a sunstone.
He forced his achy thighs to move faster up the steep slope. As he reached the top, the sun briefly broke through the ugly red clouds. He stood there, arms outstretched and eyes closed, trying to absorb as much warmth as he could before the clouds swallowed the sun again. It never took long, and this time was not an exception. As the gloom blanketed the world again, the glow near his feet brightened considerably. His heart quickened again as he slowly approached. He was reasonably certain from the glow that it was a moonstone, perhaps even two, and also some pearls, if he were really lucky.
He fell to his knees and began to scoop up material, pushing it aside so wearily at first. But then, the adrenaline began to flow and he picked up the pace until he found himself in a small depression where the onyx coal battled for dominance with the sparkling rainbow of the remains of the pulverized pretties. He was left with a scintillating puddle of colored sand. It flashed brightly as it refracted the lightning overhead. He quickly sunk his hands in the rainbow pile up to his wrists, swirling his fingers through the warm sand and feeling for patches that felt warmer, migrating to them and sifting for the warm round stones.
He had only found two sunstones so far. He was sure that he had been there for many years now, but in all that time, he had found only two. In that same time – he paused as he carefully remembered each one and counted them on his fingers – he had also found seven moonstones in total. And then there were the pearls. He had found countless. They were in their own way as pretty as moonstones, only smaller and ever so fragile, they often crumbled to dust if he only so much as looked away. It was the only time he ever bothered to keep track of the days. He counted the days until They came and searched him and took his hard found prizes. He found it easiest if he labeled the days with the old days of the week and just counted from there. For example, if he found moonstones or sunstones right now, then today would be Monday. In seven days, it would be Monday Two, and in another seven, Monday Three.
He never saw Them. He suspected They showed up after he was asleep, and then somehow drugged him to keep him from waking so They could rob him of his warm lovelies. He only knew They existed because the sunstones were always gone when he woke. They also took the moonstones if they were decently sized or if They were feeling petty. If he had nothing at all, his pearls would all be dust, crushed out of spite. He knew They did it. He always woke immediately afterwards, perhaps because of the cold. He would nervously scramble around the immediate area, desperately searching for his stones, hoping this time was different. It never was. The stones were always gone because They were always thorough. Every time, he would shed a few bitter tears as he clambered up the sooty hillside to begin his search anew and start all over again.
That was how he found it. They had taken his most recent find – twin moonstones nearly the size of his fists. The milky orbs were streaked with brilliant chrome veins and gave off so much warmth that he could put one against his front and one against his back, and he would barely feel the chill of the night, only waking up a few times instead of every ten minutes because of the cold. He had been stamping around what had been his campground for the night, looking feverishly for the twin stones. He knew they were gone, but felt he couldn’t give up without at least looking to make sure they indeed hadn't rolled away anywhere.
In reality, he was stomping around and kicking lumps of coal as hard as he could, not minding the agony of his bruised toes and trying to overcome the rage that They had taken his prizes again. Those twin moonstones had been really nice ones, too. He kicked out again. It barely registered as his boot connected with something that was soft and fuzzy instead of hard and crumbly. He kicked a few more lumps before stopping short. What was that he had just kicked?
He crawled around on the ground about where he thought the soft thing had landed. It was difficult to see much of anything in the little depression where he was searching. One chunk looked the same as all the others. He relied on his sense of touch, gripping around in the shadows for something, anything soft. All he touched were cold, dusty lumps. But then, there it was!
He hesitated to bring it into the light, just in case They might somehow be watching. He felt around for it, using his fingertips as his limited sight. It appeared to be a small pouch, woven out of some unknown, very soft, very deep grey, nearly black fabric. It seemed to absorb what little light there was. It was open on one end. It had loose drawstrings of the same color and had a large main pouch and two smaller pockets sewn into the inside edges. He cautiously upended it and out tumbled a medium-sized very exotic looking moonstone, a shiny brass key of an ancient-looking style, and most importantly, a brilliant violet sunstone that was big enough to fit comfortably in his palm. It glowed soothingly and warmed his hand.
He gasped and in desperate haste tried to stuff everything back into the bag. He managed to get the stones in but dropped the key. Furtively, he tucked the fuzzy bag into his coveralls and bent down to pick up the key. His eyes darted around but there was no one there. He hadn't seen anyone else in what felt like eons. It was just coal – hills and mountains and valleys of coal.
Picking up the key, he yelped at what he saw and fell backwards, landing hard and jarring his tailbone. He barely noticed the pain. Holding the key revealed the world to him. As far as he could see into the gloom, he saw people shuffling along, hundreds of them, heads down and kicking at the coal. Some were digging for stones. Some were sleeping and some were just shuffling along, each roughly 40 or 50 meters from their closest neighbor. They were all oblivious to anything but their desperate scrabble for fresh stones. The gloom was noticeably less while he held the key. He noticed that the clouds weren't as angry either, and the ground barely grumbled under his feet. It was just a light tremor now and again.
But what really caught his eye, what he couldn't help but stare at, were the ghostly figures that flitted across the sky like vultures over a battlefield. They were ghastly things composed of filmy tendrils of all the grey in the spectrum, ranging from the tar black of the coal to the airy grey of a cloud debating on a storm. Where their heads should have been were swirling storms of black and the deepest indigo. The occasional buzz of pale blue lightning cracked across what passed for their faces. The closest one seemed to feel his gaze and floated closer, revealing glowing yellow orbs and electric cyan teeth that were shaped like cracked and broken stalagmites and stalactites. It peered around, looking right through him as he held his breath. His one hand clung to his coveralls over where his valuable little treasures were, and the other held the key like it was a ward against evil. The wicked looking creature soon lost interest and floated off to torment a withered looking older woman. It floated near her and he watched as the woman slowed down, stopped, laid down, stirred restlessly, and then fell off to sleep. The creature’s posture changed a little and seemed to incline towards her.
He watched with baited breath as first one, then two, and then a shocking third moonstone floated out from wherever she had been hiding them. The creature's maw gaped open and its misshapen teeth gestured and articulated. The moonstones slowly floated up and were swallowed. All of her pearls floated up, too. He thought they also would be consumed. So that's what happened every time he fell asleep. He felt a rush of burning anger at these monsters, whatever they were.  The ghastly apparition seemed to examine the pearls briefly. It inclined backwards, made a very loud and sickly belching grumble, and then gently drifted off. The pearls floated in midair for several seconds. They began to vibrate violently and flashed momentarily with brilliant, warm white light. They then shuddered and exploded into a twinkling poof of frosted sprinkles that were embraced by the gentle breeze and entombed by the coal.
The creature, meanwhile, had moved some distance, floating toward a young man on a distant cliff. He realized that when he held the key, he could see things. He could see that there were other people, where before he was always so alone in the frigid miles of empty solitude. He could see the monstrous creatures, the one he'd just witnessed and several more of them on the far horizon. The light was much better as well. The clouds have calmed and lightened in tone, if not attitude. The earth no longer rumbled in ominous methods, promising worse was available.
He bent and squatted, placing the key on a pile of crumbles and long splinters of shiny ebony. He braced for the worst and was not disappointed. The clouds roiled and lightning blitzed again. Deep in the earth, he felt the machinations for a mammoth quake. He stumbled and nearly fell. He squawked in fear and desperation as the key began to tumble away. He immediately lunged for it, wrapping both his hands around it like the life preserver it had become. The world was instantly still, with only a basso thunderous boom fading into the distance.
He stood there, pressing the key into his breast, his heart thumping wildly. The prizes! He had to make sure he hadn't lost them. Careful not to drop the precious key, he gently fumbled inside his coveralls until he found the pouch. He cradled key and pouch in one grubby paw while the other used two fingers to open the drawstring and tugged the sunstone out. It flared into warm, indigo light and wrapped his whole body in a toasty envelope. Oh, ye gods! He had forgotten what being warm all over felt like. It was truly delectable.
Something told him to look up. What he saw was truly terrifying. Every single one of the monstrous creatures was looking right at him, floating with disturbing fluidity towards him. Immediately, he put the stone back in its protective pouch. Oh, the oppressive cold! He quickly held up the key again as a ward. The creatures looked confused and milled around uncertainly before gradually dispersing like chaff on a cool current.
To experiment, he lowered the key and pried the sunstone just a little out of the pouch. Only one or two of the beasts turned his way. He dropped the sunstone back into the bag, and again, there was confusion. He tried again, this time pulling the sunstone all the way out just to see what would happen. All of creatures came his way. He quickly dropped the sunstone back into the sack, and again, the result was the confused milling. He decided not to press his luck. Instead, he would use the key to put as much distance between him and the monstrosities as possible.
He held the key ahead of him and clutched his precious stones in their soft fuzzy pouch. He moved off in the direction that had the least people and monsters. He walked an entire day before their numbers began to diminish and dwindle. He walked farther still, pressing on until exhaustion numbed him. Only then did he stop, falling to the ground and sprawling amidst the coal. Only then did he retrieve his precious cargos from their pouch. Resting the key on his chest, he delicately placed a stone on the palm of his hands. He reveled in the delicious, precious warmth that blanketed him from head to toe. He knew then that everything from now on will be so different.

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